365 daily challenge summary week 20

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365 daily challenge summary week 20

Hello again, another week is over, and what a perfect timing it is to post on World Poetry day:) Hope you will enjoy this weeks poems as well here they are: Topic: Professional intimacy The limits they were so clear We have to get the product done, the emotions must be left here our senses…

MesAyah

March 21, 2012

5–8 minutes

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Hello again, another week is over, and what a perfect timing it is to post on World Poetry day:)

Hope you will enjoy this weeks poems as well

here they are:

Topic: Professional intimacy The limits they were so clear We have to get the product done, the emotions must be left here our senses were in top gear but the fasade was painted clearly, and it wasn´t room for what we share The result was more important than beeing selfish envious, feels like 100 degrees celcius just standing close to you, but our faces are so focused on the progress of this project can´t let the fear of failing, force out the unecessary when the groundbreaking results are on the break of failing barely But i got lost in it so bad I got lost in it so bad with the boundaries that we had I wished that it was me who pushed the break pads But I am glad that we both did the result in the end, was both georgeous and vivid just like our life long relationship, the best there is Pure friendship
Topic: Kony It started as a farse on the internet a result of when the the human mind intercept with the message sent, related to the feelings it may represent I saw a wast majority scream change in my timeline I saw others scream of rage while they tried to throw out their life line But also a few with a retrospective aspect that yelled: Wait, take a step back, read behind the lines, then gather your aspects Where were you when this awful events started to happen Why was Uganda on your lips all of the sudden the power of the mind and emotions, led you to open up and pushed on your buttons I agree that the story is horriffic but the message of it all aint exactly prolific and the cheap shots they use, and their narrow angle shouldn´t be enough to get your thoughts to mangle what it should do, is to enforce yourself to go deeper to untangle the story behind the story, and find out more about the actions that are handled then you are at a point to take action
Topic: Chocolate A little piece of delight flavored, milky and brown, I know i will like I might laugh at people who just swallow these bits its a piece of art, each flavour is made with the intention to hit the tastebuds, your emotions, waking up from your dream state just don’t take it as far as making chocolate your dream date then you have eaten to many and it is no longer healthy you should learn to appreciate all good, but only taste it when you are ready to be driven out on a journey filled with hunger and devotion, to recreate the same taste that sent you back here in the first place or else its just a waste of time, and respect the uniqueness the mystique lies in bewteen the sheets of sweetness and it is here the consumer will reveal its weakness while the personality of an enjoyed soul shows his true self The chocolate is more than just candy, it is the ressurection of its self
Topic: Beeing Drunk an intoxicating feeling of forgetting letting your mind go, in that true sense, just to catch your breath with its a feeling I often fled to wich led to, social events, friends, and a brain with no creative virtue a twenty twenty tunnel vision, eyepads in the size of a unicorns horseshoe And an inner voice that screams: What more can i do for you? The inner dialogue is escalating with some pace I embrace the fact, that this state has taken me to this place without feeling displaced And it is at this stage i wished that i went home and replaced this last beer, with water and escape the dry mouth tommorrow I am glad I´m on a break now, there is no sorrow left in me of taking a year long break from alcohol and it is fun to experience your friends, socialize on alcohol My body feels like a temple, and my mind is on a pedestale feel like i am a horse head in front of where I was, a year ago And the result is right in front of me, I couldnt have written this a year ago and read my life since i stopped 77 days ago, a creation of pure inner thoughts with no hidden influences to show for
Topic: Key hole Reveling of a secret, you can see it if you peep in let your eyes roll through the room, until you find what you are seeking If you only had the key you could have revealed all off its mysteries but you are stuck on the outside, wondering about the inquires that hides inside, what type of histroy hides in this room the object in the center, kind of takes the attention and grooms your mind, it wanders around, you wonder, you assume that the fumes you smell will enlighten the gloom of your mind, and you pressume that its a deeper meaning behind this door, it will reveal the picture within it if you only had the key, if only you had seen it in close contact with the object, your inner voice wouldnt be screaming If only you had the key, you could have answered all your dreams you could have edited all the scenes and finally found the key to your inner urge and screams if only You had the key, that fit the key hole
Topic: Bicycle wheel The metal sticks, are connected with the rim the wheel of fortune, recolection of a dream Rolling forward, pass intersections, swinging in its gleam the light that strikes the bike it rides, is leaning to the screams the golden glitter, thickness of its body weight shapeshifting exterior, the tension that it recreates equiped with an armored plate in case someone wants its gold in weight or better yet, wants the key to be the head of state never underestimate the powers of this wheeling creation it can overcome and deal with the most incriminating abominations but after days of standing in front of standing ovations its getting pretty sick and tired of the mass maipulation of its name and reputation So It silently retreats back to escape this public solemnization makes a few modifications before turning in Another day have passed with the sucession of the rim
Topic: Earthquake Rumblin sounds, vocal chords of the earthmovers inserted all their strength into pushing opposites towards eachother the floating magma of ther souls are boiling over its boiling point, while their opposition tries to make it cold attacking with no intention to fold their redemption song is played in d-minor, they refuse to be overthrown their cause wont get sold, thats when two worlds collide thats when the two sides meet, just to divide further apart, creation of a new tide The richterschale breaks records, the aftershakes make marks worldwide seismic waves makes an impact on the way we experience life we need the global plates to stay awake , to feel alive This human earthquake didn´t just shake us on the outside it even took a bite off, and shook our minds grabbed us by our spinal chord and got injected in our spine But it wouldn´t be a revolution if one global mind had nothing else to fight against you need a rumbling crowd to be able to even scream change so please join hands and fight you battles Peace MesAyah

31 responses to “365 daily challenge summary week 20”

simon7banks

March 21, 2012 at 3:26 pm

I like “Professional Intimacy”. You’ve taken some of the dead language people use at work and made it poetry.

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1. MesAyah
  
  March 21, 2012 at 3:28 pm
  
  Thank you Simon
  I am glad you felt that angle I was trying to go for
  
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mothcaterpillar

March 21, 2012 at 3:36 pm

Hey! So glad about your Kony verse (finally, there is someone!)…
I was wondering if you write your verses one a day or all seven at once?

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1. MesAyah
  
  March 21, 2012 at 3:43 pm
  
  I fel that it needed to be said! And when someone gave me that topic, I was overjoyed
  
  I write one each day, that is the rule i put down, and i post them on my website daily, and you get all seven in one go here on my blog.
  
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Casey B

March 21, 2012 at 4:29 pm

Great poems- thanks for sharing. 🙂

Casey

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gigoid

March 21, 2012 at 4:31 pm

MesAyah…. it’s been great to watch the evolution of your verse, from when you started to this week’s output. In my opinion, it’s getting better all the time… you’ve always showed a lot of creativity, and it’s maturing, showing signs of more discipline in your mind and this process… keep on keepin’ on…. 🙂

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1. MesAyah
  
  March 21, 2012 at 9:36 pm
  
  Thank you, I am glad that you are noticing the progress, that I actually evolve from this challenge, I can feel it myself as well, I can put much more energy into the mind instead of on the actual writing now after 20 weeks, it feels great
  
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Worldly Winds

March 21, 2012 at 5:26 pm

Really liking the Kony verse and the Earthquake verse. I like your more political stuff – it needs to be said, and it needs someone to get the younger generations thinking instead of chasing the celebrity carrot.

I also like your more humorous verses 🙂

Thanks!

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irenelefort

March 21, 2012 at 8:27 pm

Happy Poetry Day to you too! 🙂 I am going to enjoy a piece of chocolate now; let is melt slowly in my mouth. 🙂 Cheers!

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lbtk

March 21, 2012 at 11:43 pm

So much talent! Thanks for sharing such moving pieces. Can’t wait till the next installment. Sandy

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ayasonice

March 22, 2012 at 8:20 pm

awesome poetry!

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Michael Paragon

March 23, 2012 at 2:00 am

Ok…you’ve convinced me! When I lived in Atlanta, we used to gather at this local cafe called Marlee’s on Tuesday nights and light up the mic with spoken word. I was issued a 30 day challenge but, I never could focus enough to do it. But you’ve inspired me with this. Thanx!
Namaste…

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kaycee

March 23, 2012 at 3:34 am

I love the Kony Poem. Made a lot of sense.

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maryfollowsthelamb

March 23, 2012 at 7:50 pm

So much variety! I’m impressed!

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Lindy Lee

March 23, 2012 at 9:31 pm

Stimulating thoughts in a personal rhythm all your own…

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Terri O.A.

March 25, 2012 at 3:09 pm

Very nice moving poetry…..the bicycle wheel was my favorite. I think I know what you were trying to say! Poetry gets colored by the mind of the reader though….have a good week!

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kkmeow

March 26, 2012 at 5:57 am

yes yes & yes!
so glad you did one on kony.

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clinock

March 26, 2012 at 8:11 am

thank you for following art rat cafe, I am honoured. been away for awhile but now exploring sites i have missed – so much to explore in yours so need time but what i have seen blows me away. your words are honest and touch my heart.

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KC

March 26, 2012 at 10:44 pm

Hey there! Thanks for the follow…hope you enjoy my stuff as much as I’ve enjoyed yours so far.

I’m impressed, btw. If it’s not a rude question (just an ignorant one 😛 ) did you grow up speaking english?

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1. MesAyah
  
  March 26, 2012 at 10:53 pm
  
  And thank you for following back, I am enjoying reading yours as well.
  
  No i didn’t grow up speaking english, but I was exposed of it from around age 10 or so. How come?
  
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  1. KC
    
    March 26, 2012 at 10:59 pm
    
    Just something in the rhythm scheme you use a lot. It’s more lyrical than most english-speakers/rappers. I’m always impressed by bilingual people, but even more so when they show such talent in a language other than their own. 😉
    
    Also, kudos on the video…very nice, very disturbing, and a great cause. I will be sure to go back at the end of the week, when I have money again. 😛
  2. MesAyah
    
    March 26, 2012 at 11:05 pm
    
    I think that is the beauty of billingual writing, you add a new melody from your own origin into a new one without making it wrong, I Love listening to music with that speacial touch in it. So I am glad that you enjoyed that:)
    
    Nice and disturbing are to very describing words of the whole consept of it, I wanted to have the disturbing part lying inside the perfect surface where we hush down the disturbance.
    
    You are welcome back at any time:)
Tony Single

March 26, 2012 at 11:57 pm

Mate, I am impressed by what I read here. I am enamoured of the lilting style of your words when I read them in my head, and the variety and depth of the topics that you cover is also appealing. I love chocolate, so that’s a winner for me right there, but I’m also moved by Earthquake and Being Drunk. Thanks for following me at my blog; I would never have known that your blog even existed if you hadn’t!

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butimbeautiful

March 27, 2012 at 2:33 am

Wow! A poem a day? And such good ones – impressive!

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Angie

March 27, 2012 at 10:30 pm

Thank you for following arthurmapes.wordpress.com! Your work is so creative!

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iamlenise

March 27, 2012 at 10:31 pm

I loved ‘Chocolate’ …How true..haha 😉

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bookcookiez

March 27, 2012 at 10:40 pm

I love the Earthquake poem/rap! I don’t usually listen to rap but yours are exceptional. You are really talented. 🙂

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infinine

March 28, 2012 at 5:21 pm

Whazzup MesAyah! I did a little performance piece which was inspired by you and the Trayvon Martin case here in the U.S., check it out and thanks. Peace.

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1. MesAyah
  
  March 28, 2012 at 5:45 pm
  
  Thank you very much, glad I can be an inspiration
  
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maryfollowsthelamb

March 30, 2012 at 9:08 pm

Oh yeah!

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ramanan50

April 10, 2012 at 11:32 am

Find do I people so dear.
Who can write Queen so clear,
With toughts on Life sublime.
Wish more were here to chime.

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