a torn image of a half god
Reflected in the mirror
It looks back at me
And my dark eyes
Sheds a shadow
To create the resemblance of a tear
Poem: Reflections
a torn image of a half god Reflected in the mirror It looks back at me And my dark eyes Sheds a shadow To create the resemblance of a tear
31 responses to “Poem: Reflections”
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Just great.
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Thank you
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NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Potent imagery, loved it.
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Thank you. Still trying to decypher where this came from. Stream of consciousness works in mysterious ways
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It does. And, at times, it has you writing gems.
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mine stream too, if i eva try in think about what i am writing, i fail terribly lol
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Lol. That is so true
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Moving and raw. Well done.
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Enjoyed your poem, Thank you!
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Lovely, stark, raw imagery. I loved it!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you for following a post . I wish good luck on yours:) Music is Art’s perfect sounds: Have a nice day.
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Thank you for the follow! I like your poem “Reflections”.
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Lovely poem – merci, too, for visiting & following my blog. Bon weekend!
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“To create the resemblance of a tear”
What a beautiful verse, what a wonderful image. You’re a Poet! Thanks for this beautiful poem.
Keep on writing, VIVE LA POESIE!-
My deepest gratitude for those kind words. Hope I can give you more of these experiences in the future
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Reblogged this on MARSocial Author Business Enhancement Poet's Post.
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thank you so much for the reblog:)
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Love the image. Thanks!
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Interesting. I like poetry, much like yours, impromptu. I manage to sneak in a poem in my novels. Thanks for dropping by my blog.
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Thanks for stopping by and liking my blog/poem.
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Thanks for stopping by Whole in the Head and sharing your Reflections. Happy poetry month!
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Thank you. And right back at you:) it was that in Kristiansand poem that caught my attention. Thank you for sharing that
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So beautiful and deep.
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I love the line “sheds a shadow.” Poignant.
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Thank you so much Hannah 🙂
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Nice — tears are healing and shadowy — keep up the good work! By the by, thank you very much for your acknowledgement of EccentricsSpeak; it is truly appreciated. Best, Rebecca
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What a beautiful poem! thanks for sharing and following my own blog. “The resemblance of a tear” is a very nice expression. I love word with the sound “ance”, in french we have many like “espérance”, “silence” et “ressemblance”. Merci !
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My feelings are louder than words.
I can see it in your poem reflection, pithy and succinct I must say. -
My feelings are louder than words.
I can see it in your poem reflection, pithy and succinct I must say. Thanks for following me.
MesAyah 
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