Day 7
04.03.2014
Topic: Seed growing

Yesterday I planted a seed
I was dedicated to leave it
And let it just breath it’s way through
So i named the seed ,be
And left it like that

When I returned
It had merged with the seeds
Life and grief
And was torn between 
Exist or fade
I watered them both
Before it had a choice
And then I left it to be again

On my return be had been busy
Faded grief and let life exist within the seed

It said to me,
In the beginning it was all dark
A small spark ignited and a voice spoke
I am life, feed me and I will feed you everything.
From my right I could hear a whisper 
Grief
And that was all it said

I was left curious
For days I was left with myself
To draw the lines between what grief had said

I went in and started to explore 
For days straight
And finally I found myself in grief over the days
That I had left in vain over curiousity for a name.

I then turned to life and said
I have failed to exist in your ways
I faded life
And grief took over
Everything

Life looked at me and smiled
I have always been right here
No matter how much you fade away
You will always be
To be in grief is being a part of who I am
Be 
And you will never cease to exist

Be looked at me again and said
I am be
And I can grow into anything
It will be beautiful

I saw a man in be
I could finally call him being

15 responses to “A 365 Daily Challenge: Day 7”

  1. Reminds me of the Metaphysical poets , like the Vaughans. Nice!

    1. Thank you Simon. Now I have to go out and check out what the Vaughans are all about:)

      1. Two brothers, Henry and Thomas (I think), writing in the late 17th century ( I think). Used a lot of spiritual metaphor and nature imagery. I think they were Welsh, so had a wistful lilt and a strange certain calm.

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    There are times when you must follow a certain pilgrim.

  3. Beautiful written. Thank you for sharing this poem.

    1. Thank you:) please tell me If you want to participate with guest readings, please contact me

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    Thaddeus Dombrowski

    This is great.

    1. thank you Thaddeus 🙂

    1. thank you so very much 🙂

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  6. This is stunning.

    1. Bow in gratitude. Thank you for your kind words. ❤

      1. Anytime! (:

  7. beautiful poem…….Thanks for sharing and for visiting my blog too.

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